uh, your banner is still on fire.. oh wait, the flame is controlled. my bad. :P

If you believe the stories, several stadii that I’ve been to have mysteriously burned down. I think they’re nonsense, myself.

The roof the roof the roof is on fire
The roof the roof the roof is on fire
The roof the roof the roof is on fire
We don’t need no water let the motherf* burn
Burn motherf* burn

rofl! so, um, I guess the flame is nearly controlled.. could the stadium bursting into flames and the audience fleeing be the start of the challenge? We all run off to find our stories and comment..

Very dramatic and magical entrance. Way to make a spectacle of it. If KISS taught us anything, pyrotechnics can go a long way.

Indeed dramatic! I really like this one :)

I’m always sad when I am not mentioned, hehe!
I really have been away too long.

You always do well at fantasy or sci-fi so I’m not even surprised at how awetastic this is :)

This is great!

Still I wonder if it could’ve been greater if the first line were: “I appeared in a blaze of heatless fire…”? (I absolutely love that line.) If nothing else, a semicolon instead of comma might be used in the first sentence, don’t you think?

All in all, you’re a flash of brilliance, my dear Sir Swordsman!

Now that I look back at it, it does seem a bit clunky.

I’m sorry, Lady Pandorica, but I’m afraid I haven’t yet had the pleasure of meeting you in a writing sense yet. I thank you for the compliment though, as it seems you’re far more familiar with my work than I am with yours.