Dirty revolutionaries with laptops? It’s a bit odd, but I suppose the character limit got you there. The description is good, but perhaps too large for your space. For instance, you could have left it at she had a nice figure, rather than comment directly on her boobs, as that made it veer a bit towards Harlequin Romance territory. Potential and possibility here, perhaps just a bit mired in a visual you really wanted to get across.
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