I always like your stories. They all have an effortless balance of description and plot and they pull me in every time.

Great piece. For me, It’s the simple way you are able to explain a complete character with only one line: It raised what might have been an eyebrow. It’s a gift, thanks for sharing.

The conversational tone and the dialogue itself is pulled off very naturally.

Brad’s character plays very nicely, too – fully in keeping with someone who might have suspected the truth before “It” knocked him for six with it.

The religious spin on this piece… that we “choose” heaven or hell… is really powerful. I feel like so many of us could be right in Brad’s shoes…

Beautifully written. It took me a second to realize why he light his cigerette on the ground, ’cause the ground is on fire!

This is more compelling then any Jack Chick writing.