Wow. I haven’t a clue why it works (I would assume since I’m no good at poetry) – but this is so poignant. I venture, however, that the metre and rhyme of the last three lines really makes this click.

Great title and some neat images. Hmm, may have to do something here.

I want to pick a favorite line but I can’t! It’s gorgeous, flowing… the whole poem cascades like milk. You just want to hold each word on your tongue for a little while. It’s beautiful.

i get this one, and it is a fabulous description of the lightest caress, or lukewarm apathy, or even blending in.