I want a translation for this!

Did you mean moorish? I didn’t understand what moreish meant unless you are adding -ish as in imprecisely, or a little bit. Otherwise I think it ends strongly and keeps a good rhythm thorough out. i could groove to this at an open mic.

It flows nicely, even if I have no idea what it is about. That’s poetry for you, isn’t it.

At first I pictured one of those machines that they have at national monuments, you know, where you put the penny in it and it smashes it and you get it back with a dolphin on it or something.

And then I decided to stop trying to understand your poetry, and just let how beautiful it is wash around me.

I wiktionaried moreish. It tells me it means wanting more of something especially when pertaining to food. And an interesting anagram of the word is: heroism. That’s neither here nor there, but it made me glad I investigated :)

No idea what you are writing about but lovely all the same.

so lost. I don’t know what steel strings stopped the inner workings, what bit what or who, who is ascending to the sky, nor what shore is stealing someone’s scent. But it flows so nicely!

This poem is somewhat nausiating, even though it has lots of nice poetic wording. I disagree with the other comments, and feel this isn’t your best work. It confused the reader but tried covering up the confusion with poetics. You can put lipstick on a pig, but it’s still a pig.

Please take my comment in the spirit of constructive criticism. If it helps, this isn’t as bad as Vogon Poetry. :)

You win some, you lose some. Thanks Krulltar!