Ooh, well that could go a lot of ways. Intense moment of story, told in a staccato fashion, which word I have just misspelled. Nice job making me wonder who the protagonist is, who has the yellow eyes, and what’s in the box.

nice of you to comment on one of my less-depressing stories, THX haha :P.

Creepy, creepy. Intriguing too. I like the repetitive storytelling as well. Nice imagery.