I asked for a couple of opinions, one from someone who is an English teacher in a high school, and they said they this could get by under PG13 because of the descriptions.

I can easily mark it mature if need be but I’m hoping to get by without.

Sorry if anyone’s offended by the lack of mature content marking.

After reading this I think I need a cold shower. You’re correct, I think, about the PG rating, because it suggests everything but doesn’t graphically spell it out. I liked it a lot.

excellent demonstration of walking the razor’s edge- and with such style, too!

evocative and descriptive with a bit of danger too.

For whatever reason, Katy Perry was singing in my head as I read this. I liked the bit about the nun at the end. Very classy!

Edgy and dangerous. I like it a lot. The last paragraph is what makes this piece. Excellent read.

thank you for participating. you made a very close second place!