“Every wonder what it would feel like to have a white-hot blade separate your skin from the muscle?” I believe the word every should be ever. I like the description its very clear and captures the gruesome tone.

Very strange scenario. I liked that you kept it very tightly focused, even though you mention the hunters and fate of humanity.

I second liking tight focus with hints of very broad details.

Also, I’m a sucker for specificity used wisely, so I think using “Smuckers” was a wise choice over generic “jam.”

Best line: “After all, it was his soul”

I third liking tight focus with suggestions to something larger. Indeed, the title is incredibly suggestive.