Odd little train of thought. Not sure what to make of it. It’s kind of rambling, but it feels like that’s the point or the intent. In general, you shouldn’t start sentences with conjunctions (and, but, etc), but since he’s kind of rambling/talking/writing it kind of works. Eh, it’s a toss up here but something to think about as you’re writing in a more narrative or less conversational tone/style.