Ooh, a new take on the sun/moon theory. I like where this is going.

That’s very nicely told, ‘lil Krully, Comté d’Fìcly.

I love this, especially the bit where you correct the Lady’s theory on the Sun and Moon (I actually found that to be quite brilliant…).

I know it is probably due to the character limitation, but the start of the piece feels a little choppy. Not sure what could be done to fix it though.