Nicely told in a straight-forward manner. You do have one lapse in tense, having the last sentence in the first paragraph in present instead of past. Aside from that, the other thing lacking is much of a plot or story or conflict. I know it’s a short piece, but even in a short span you need something to grab attention.
I think they might still hoist pianos outside buildings… shudders at very thought I don’t think I could live on the upper floor of an old apartment building and still own a piano: the moving of it would be too nervewracking.
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