Beautiful. I love the repetition, itself a reminder of the despairingly overwhelming disaster. And the sudden shift in perspective, abrupt and vague and completely haunting. Nicely done. Minor note: In the fourth paragraph, saftey —> safety
Beautiful. I love the repetition, itself a reminder of the despairingly overwhelming disaster. And the sudden shift in perspective, abrupt and vague and completely haunting. Nicely done.
Minor note: In the fourth paragraph, saftey —> safety
The repetition is so haunting. I can’t think of anything original to say so I will just second everything Miles said.
Miles Letham 
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