That was one of my favorite lines in a sea of awesome creativity and vivid images! The slant rhymes, or syllable rhymes, really reeled me into this world. I love this. The way ‘thoughts’ rolls off the tongue with ‘wasps’ is cool. Glad you’re back!
@smdasilva- There is really nothing to “get”, per se. I wrote it so that nobody would “get” it. I think it’s more interesting when you get to make your own conclusions.
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