Hey Kihd, good to see you back on Ficly!

Nice poem you got here. I like the subject, it’s right up my alley.
‘…dreams dismembered’ – cool man, cool.
‘ligature’? – nice. I had to look that one up. []o)

I found this a little disjointed. The first 2 stanzas didn’t seem to match the rest. Maybe that is what you were aiming at?

@smdasilva- This was actually a partner activity, so I
‘m not surprised you thought that. I’m pretty happy with it though.

Thanks, both of you!