That was silly. There aren’t even hardly any zeppelins in the air these days. So, yeah, amusing, but brief and a bit flat for me.

Perhaps it’s just a brief commentary on pessimism, that even when you imagine this wonderful of an outcome you can’t help but kill it with a zeppelin?

There’s a reason for the title. I really had to force this one out. The whole story is an excuse for the last line.

I agree with THX, it was a little flat for me. Perhaps more adjectives to give the writing some life, and make the reader be able to envision it better.

laugh to myself….uh I liked this alot. It was a perfect reminder that shit can happen to anyone at any time. I gotta say that you Brits are kickass writers!!!