This reminds of the premise behind the tv show Sienfeld…as being about “nothing”… but somehow it resonates strongly. I like it. the 2nd sentence and the 2nd to last sentence are missing words :)
This reminds of the premise behind the tv show Sienfeld…as being about “nothing”… but somehow it resonates strongly. I like it.
the 2nd sentence and the 2nd to last sentence are missing words :)
Yep, it definitely resonates but doesn’t quite get there. Breaking it up into paragraphs might have helped, as well as slipping in some more affect about this Jeff guy. Lots of potential—just needs a bit of cleaning up.
Krulltar 
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