nicely done! And if he does, what will he find, can he change their lives to make them less mundane, or will he have the courage to break it off? Two storm tossed lovers, both tossed by the same sea of stubbornness.

There’s a different feel in the execution of your narrative from Elsha’s, but this is from the perspective of the other character so it works. They are different people after all. I like this story especially now that you kept some hope alive.

It’s funny, because usually I am the one commenting about hope… hee hee.

Thanks for the comments guys. I’m not surprised there is a different tone—not sure I could accurately copy Elsha’s style if I tried.

Nice!

You misspelled “Caribbean”. But I loved it anyways!

I didn’t misspell it.

It was a typo.

Yep, a typo.

This works really well as a standalone, it’s got a Jimmy Buffett vibe to it. Now to read back through the other chapters…

Really enjoyed your story. Especially that last line – it’s how I feel every time I go to the beach. : )