X) That was quite the twist at the end! It was certainly a welcome break from permit-test-studying, I can tell you that.

i got the doll feel almost immediately. maybe i’m spending too much time around my daughters ;-)

Another entry that makes me laugh. Now I feel bad for how I treated my barbies though…

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I feel like it gave a little too much away in the middle if you were really going for a surprise ending. Not a bad story in general, though. The doll’s voice is pretty spot-on.

I didn’t expect the twist ending. I just thought it was in the future when people have implants that allow them to survive without heads.