This is dedicated to a student who’d gone to my school, who was grades ahead of me, and who recently took his own life. It’s the confluence of my thoughts and knee-jerk reactions, and… I don’t know right now. I’m a bit frazzled.

Very sad, and I understand the feeling. Nicely told with a touch of realism there towards the end.

One grammar point, the second sentence in the second paragraph is called a ‘comma splice’ and needs to either switch to a semi-colon or add a conjuntion.

Thank you, I added a semi-colon :)