I recently commented on someone doing a story with too much exposition and not enough event or character. So, I tried to throw on a sequel that gave a bit of information in the form of an interaction. Not sure how it turned out, but it was a fun exercise.

“Hey, maybe we’ll be the mess, capsice?”

I really like how tight this ficly is.

I am a little confused about who they are talking about. They say a man was killed but also that Hinkle will never be removed. Was Hinkle the man who survived and chased the witch?

Also, you might want a comma in this sentence “The man was killed, Tenwith.” Just makes it a little more clear that he is speaking to Tenwith, at first I thought Tenwith was the man who was killed or some arcane manner of speaking like forthwith.

suddenly everyone is rotund…

SO, these two are cleaners.. clearing up evidence so the human world doesn’t find out?