this is a fine piece of work, and that first paragraph…it rolls around the mouth like the tastiest succulent morsels of the juiciest roast dinner…hehehe…how’s that for a simile? I was serious, though, the language is delectable. I wish I could write that well.

And leaving it open-ended, with room for more…you’re good.

Goodness, you’re making me blush. I’m trying to figure out if the last sentence makes sense. I think it says the same thing twice but I can’t figure out how to reword it and keep in the character limit.