That was cute and a nice variation on the challenge theme of a concession stand. The two guys are imminently likable, which is cool. Definitely go the British setting through as well with vocabulary as opposed to coming out and stating it. Not sure if that was intentional or just that you happen to be British, but it worked and added to the story.

I just happen to be British, saw the challenge and thought, “A concession stand? At a school match? What a ridiculous idea…what? They actually have those somewhere? If the school matches I know had had ‘concession stands’ they’d look like this…”

What are crisps??
Well this is cute, I like how you ended it. “they like crisps more than goals.” ha, funny.