I know that it’s hard to find other words that aren’t “you,” to describe what you’re saying but I feel like it’s repeated a lot more than sounds natural. It’s not a bad write, but to me it feels like every other word is YOU so it’s somewhat distracting for me to read. You may want to consider revising some of it and taking some of those out, it will make it a better piece.
Some of the sentences in your second paragraph are worded a little strangely, look over some of them and re-read it, you may find some things to fix.
Infinity.