Took me a while to get into this one, I guess because the first sentence is broken awkwardly and the first couple paragraphs have a tone I was not expecting through their phrasing. But once I got to the end and figured out who they were and what they were doing, it all clicked into place and I could see it unfold. Then it was awesome, like walking into someone else’s dream; disorienting at first, but then displaying a fascinating snippet of life.

I like the tone here, the friendly melancholy as this phase of life seems to be coming to a close. It’s nice that the one person seems to have a plan, even if it involves a bit of a drive. I liked it.

I didn’t find it awfully clear who did the driving, but the atmosphere of reflection on good times gone by was carried nonetheless.

Wow, you don’t feed us much, but that make’s me starve for more. That’s why I like it. This one tiny momentary, maybe a 2 minute exchange .

I see these two in many different situations.