I really like the fact that until the very end, I assumed that they were in the same room. Very cool!! The only thing I would change: “he was astound_ed_ at how blunt he was being.” Other than that, great story!

Thanks a lot! I sort of wanted that twist on the story about the phone call, so it’s appreciated that I got that effect down.
Oh and thanks for the little error I made, I wouldn’t have noticed it haha.

I agree with Emilou, the twist ending was unexpected and was very cool.