Nice, a serial killer groupie. She’ll end up marrying a prisoner. Why not, she’ll always know where he is.

I wonder whose clothes she’s wearing…..

Very cool opening concept.

That was funny, and I liked the prevalence of dialog. It worked well, and the small bit of non-dialog fit in quite well. The scream made for a good cliffhanger as it could be something real, or given how you’ve characterized her, for no reason whatsoever. Nicely done.