It’s funny, cause I just barely wrote a piece with just dialog, so it’s good to see someone else do the same thing, albeit an entirely different topic.

Their calm demeanor comes through nicely, sets the tone and characterizes them quite a bit. Nice job also getting across the expositional elements, hinting at a few others, and covering the action, all just with dialog.

Can’t find anything to nitpick, so great job. Okay, it’s a bit macabre, but I’ve dealth with a few snipers, and they can actually be like this.

^^ THX, what? you’ve dealt with snipers?? what on earth do you do???

This is a great story, just like he said, the characters really bring out their own personalities all with being sort of nonchalant and sort of humorous. I like the way you set the tone to this, and how it is all dialogue. I actually don’t feel like there should be detail to it, i like how all the focus is on the words and the ending is semi…entertaining, but not in a sick murderous way. Just the way you wrote it made me chuckle.

good write for sure.

I was kind of shocked to find them as snipers, so good job with the twist. For a moment i thought it might have been two crime scene detectives, replaying the murder, but finally the realization hit, bringing it all together in one glorious, albeit bloody scene.