Very exciting, and I liked the jump from calmly submitting to the frisking to all out action. Nicely done on that count, and it flowed briskly and smoothly from there. Great job on the action, telling just enough to give the idea but not so much as to slow it down.
Yeah, another installment in a great series! Most of the computer guys I know wouldn’t be able to sprint up 3 flights of stairs or use a gun, but this is the future and it is awesome.
The underground computer guys have been on the run from megacorp for years, they have to run and climb up and down sewer pipes. I figured they were lithe creatures. :P
THX 0477
smdasilva {LoA}
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