It’s a neat metaphor for love and how we can get trapped in sorrow for our loss. Kind of a technical writing point, but starting sentences with a conjuntion (and, but, or, etc), even though we speak that way, robs your writing of a lot of strength. Great job on the idea and imagery though.
Awesome imagery, you have tackled the metaphorical world and rose to the top on this one! I dont’ care if your sentences start with And, because to me, they whisper in and sometimes a whisper is loud enough. It makes it more like dialogue, more natural.
@Infinity – Thanks! Don’t worry, I do, too. (Though that might make us both weird…)
@THX 0477 – Thank you, for the advice and the comment in itself. On this one – though it could just be because I wrote this – I personally have Elsha’s view on this, but I’ll definitely keep that in mind while I’m writing. :)
@Elsha – Jeez, it’ll be comments like these that inflate my head until you all detest me – but until then, thank you very much! :)
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