Comments on Your Patient Awaits Treatment, Doctor by Tad Winslow

ElshaHawk (LoA)

awesome! I enjoyed this very much. the third and last stanzas were my favorites.
- Posted about 8 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Riley

_{brain explosion} WOOAAAHHH
- Posted about 8 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
THX 0477

That was awesome. Great use of line length in an effective way. I may be biased cause of the metaphor, but one of my favorites of your poems.
- Posted about 8 years ago.
32 ^2

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- Posted about 8 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Brebelles {LoA}

I LOVE THIS. SO. MUCH!
- Posted about 8 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Tad Winslow

Thank you all for the positive comments. They mean a lot :)
- Posted about 8 years ago.
Abby (LoA)

WOW! that’s amazing. You definately deserve all the praise for this one…
The best poem I’ve read in quite some time.

The rhythm is brilliant, language fantastic. And the structure is very enjoyable…

Thanks for a great read =)
Abby x
- Posted about 8 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Kihd

The third stanza is definitely my favorite. Impressive work altogether. Brill to the brim, yo. :)
- Posted about 8 years ago.
- 5 out of 5