very dark, very angry

I’m not a poet, but this gives me chills.
I can’t say whether you did good or bad, but from my perspective of just a reader, this is so good.
I have no idea what it’s about but it sounds like a sexual abuse story to me.
super good. I really like this. Good job!

This is a brilliant expression of rage…as though the emotion has just been poured onto paper (metaphorically =) )

Great rhythm, great structure. I have no criticism! Stay strong – you’re amazing,
Abby xxx