“packet of blank knowledge” love it! There’s definately some nice imagery going on here. In my opinion, the first line of the last paragraph should contain a semi-colon instead of a comma….but that’s just a niggle… Nicely written Abby x
True Story. My senior year history exam: I fell asleep with a lollipop in my mouth. I woke up with ten minutes on the clock and a puddle of sickly sweet drool on the exam. I got a grade of 103 percent.
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Abby (LoA) 
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