These read as fantastic characters!! Would very much like to see what you have in store here… Minor typo when the darkness speaks, should be: “indeed, we knew” ? Also, is Abdumal male or female, cause teh Shadow Walker says she wishes for “his” presence, then she says, “when SHE was in trouble.” Other than that, great start!
Over the Precipice of the Unknown; Into the Frontier of Uncertainty 
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