Jesus’ laugh was sexy, like someone who smoked too much. “I read electricity. When I touch anything conductive, I’m updated. I’m a chameleon too. But you know that, right Barnaby?”
Crazy bizarre stuff. At first I was reading it like the Spanish use of the name, [hey-zeus], but by the end it seems like this is some brash, cyber punk Jesus [gee-zuss]. Not sure I get that, but okay.
A couple of run-ons in the first bit which could use some cleaning up.
I’m not going to pretend that I understand. But it made me giggle…Now I’m picturing Jesus as some kind of gangster – still in charge despite the contrast of his physical reality.
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Abby (LoA)