I really like your command of writing. The six questions distracted me a bit,but the lulling rhythm of the first two paragraphs, punctuated by the short last sentence really helped to underscore the mix of awe and loneliness that I can only imagine one would feel in space.
I really like your command of writing.
The six questions distracted me a bit,but the lulling rhythm of the first two paragraphs, punctuated by the short last sentence really helped to underscore the mix of awe and loneliness that I can only imagine one would feel in space.
ipe