Nice…setting her free again. Maybe she’ll save the others, too.

Well I learned a new word. Yawp – love it =). The tone of this piece is generally disjointed – in a good way – as I feel it emphasises the helplessness of Amber and the inevitability of events.

I like the contrast that the final paragraph brings…almost a sudden calm.
Very emotive.
Abby x

you freed her! and quickly. It seems she gets out of her confusion rapidly and makes her move as a true heroine should, with speed and determination. The witch will not be happy.

amazing descriptions, very artful.

I like this. I like the feel. For me you captured what alot of abused child long for… “Searching to be held”… I imagine most abuse victims can make it through it, as long as they have someone to hold on to.