Could use a bit more action, imho, but the concept and writing is fantastic stuff!

I like how this is pictured in my mind.
very lovely writing :)

hoooray! lots and lots of kudos for actually entering. and it’s a great idea written brilliantly.
thankeee
Abby x

you’re a very talented writer :)

Thank you kindly, ma’am!

I love the imagery, but then again, Autumn is a beautiful season. How can the image not be fabulous? Still the simplicity… it really juxtaposes what I think is the complexity of Autumn. Everything happens in Autumn so quickly, and it’s nice to relish in the slow wonderful moments.

I have a phobia of leaves, so it makes me glad to hear someone loves them! Ok, mainly of the bugs on the leaves I fear…hmm! Love the story! As a child I loved the leaves, as an adult, I dread them.