Lovely descriptions of everything, really continuing the style of the previous bits well. So, if I followed correctly, she is now tiny-sized, like the Indian in the Cupboard? Neat development and not one I had thought about doing.

I was thinking Mrs Pepperpot style =) but yeah

Delightful little twist, and i can’t help but love the cliffhanger ending

Hopefully it’s not a .99 cent store, I want it to be one of those expensive places, where you call for an appointment. Or, maybe one of the coolest pawn shops in the world….Yeah, Santa’s Pawn Shop!

A lot of interesting things could happen from this…I always love how your exposition passages flow so well.