I think you’re missing a period after “Shading”

a little maudlin, especially the last line, but you’ve obviously got a lot of soul.

i’m actually kind of like… afraid of this story. I don’t understand it. It just flowed from my pen during spanish class, like most of the things i post here :P

I really like this! If you wrote it in spanish class, from my experience, you probably were trying to get away, even if the place was colder and more lonely than that classroom XD
I love pieces that try and take you away.