Cute idea for a holiday…assuming that’s not an actual holiday somewhere. I liked the little ‘two dads’ line snuck in there, perhaps a hint at some future iteration of society where that is more common. His question about when it will get better is a run-on, minor edit.

Nice idea, I’m kind of glad to see a holiday that isn’t entirely seasonally based so it would work world wide. A little sad perhaps…but that might just be me.
Abby x