It’s a bit disjointed, but I like the narrative tone you have. Another good entry.

This is a very sad, yet interesting, take on the challenging. Very emotional, but well written.

I liked your paragraph separation – makes reading easy and enjoyable.

Your last line is particularly good.
Abby x

btw i meant to emphasise the fact that I like your focus on the literal drawing instead of the story within the drawing. Unique =)