Villain’s got motive. yeah.

Exciting start with lots of possibilities. I like her reasoning there, very tyrant-like.

Best of luck with NaNoWriMo this year! This year is again probably not going to work for me, but who knows.

Ooh, I love scapegoats! I feel this is a web of plot twists and turns waiting to happen.

Oh my goodness, NaNoWriMo is my life for the next month. I wish you both good luck! (Though THX, it’s the same for me, I probably won’t be able to finish this year.)

At the first line of speech I actually thought: “ooh goody, they’ll do!” Oh, I scare myself sometimes. I’ve never heard of NaNoWriMo … somebody help. Please?

Anyway back to the ficly in hand. Might I suggest making it “foreboding queen ONCE again” … just a bit more drama really. Anyway I hope this develops OK for you. It sounds great.
So good luck with this challenge whatever it may be. (and THX and Mo too)
Abby x

NaNoWriMo = the most difficult yet interesting way to spend a November

It’s a novel writing challenge (standing for National Novel Writing Month) and the goal is to write 50,000 words within the month of November. It is both awful and amazing at the same time :D
And thank you! With my supply of coffee restocked, I am definitely ready for some late-night writing. (Kinda.) :)

thanks =) sounds amazing. I shall definately look it up

Ah! Loving this beginning. Sounds like a Sims Medieval quest :P It’s written in that way anyway xP

This story really drewme in. I like it a lot. Good job apey.

This story really drewme in. I like it a lot. Good job apey.

Very well done, I like it! Good character exposition and start of the story!