The structure is so perfect. Broken up like that. Like realy head-thoughts. Love it.

Very cute amidst the tragic theme. Seems to suggest both hope and despair at the same time. Lovely, heartfelt poem.

really goodddddd!! I like the structure as well, I think of course it adds to everything. & also I like the line about being an outcast. Really nice.

A true poet indeed Abby. Your stuff is really good and I enjoy reading it.