Misspelled last word. tut-tut…So hen-pecked even before the wedding, or is the last line belonging to someone other than the queen?
I really liked the concept, and sympathise greatly with poor Morris. I would so love to sequel on this but don’t think I’d be able to do it justice. Ah well…
Really enjoyed the second paragraph – beautiful phrasing…although I get the feeling you battled with this piece a little? Abby x