“Every synapse is singed!” That’s such a nice, complete little phrase, I just thought I’d mention it.
Seems like their marriage is becomming a little rusty too. I like the development in Ora’s character – is it Dora, or Ora? Or is Ora just a nickname? Either way, nice husband’s name too. I like that Ora’s standing up for herself too.
I think the ‘oil showers’ question deserves it’s own question mark. Two separate questions will increase the pace, and emphasise Zev’s suspicion.
Abby (LoA)