(quite to quiet?)

Why don’t you turn this into a challenge?

Something like-

Your challenge is to have this exact line (from a song…..) in your Ficly: And I remember quiet evenings trembling close to you…

hehehe…thanks for the correction there. I did this for a challenge…the Song Stories challenge. Still though, it might be a good idea.

very clever idea!

I loved this. A story about writer’s block, very sneaky. The song line made me think of a small, vulnerable little thing shivering and the writer feeling drawn to it protectively.

That image stayed in my mind throughout and it was a nice full circle at the end when he considered asking his wife for help – it turned the vulnerable little thing back into the writer rather than the object of his affection.