Okey dokey I shall read on in a moment. Typoooooos: missing a ‘d’ at the end of the second line in ‘and’. Also a ‘t’ at the end of ‘thought’ in the second last line.

I’m intrigued. The final few lines confused me a little but it must just be bedtime. And…I learned some new words. Namely, ‘balustrade’ and ‘anethema’ so thankee for that!

Linguisticly it is very well written. Good grammar and vocabulary.
I shall read on.
Abby x

Sadly, mostly true. Sorry on the typos, this was a bit of a rush job :). I might come back and edit a bit later…thanks as always :).

Don’t sweat the grammatical errors bro, it was a kickass piece! I feel like shouting the same stuff at my neighbors!!!

Well, it’s quite a scenario, so I can’t wait to see how you got a name out of this. Loud people can be such a bother.