A little experimental. I thought I’d try something new.

Who killed herself? o.O. So it’s a hospital calling someone to give bad news, right? That’s how I read it anyway. Really brilliant. Fantastic new idea. Poetry is the best thing to experiment with.

The stunted speech and repetition gave a real sense of grief. Very well written,
Abby x

Thanks. My friend killed herself on Monday and this is basically my end of the conversation. My memory of it is blurred but this stands out.

been there m really sorry. xxx

Definitely experimental. I think it worked, vagueness and all. I have no idea who is involved, but the feeling still comes across. Nicely done.