So I wanted to try something new, and this was it.
Inspired by OpenSkies.

I know it may suck.
Don’t judge,
I am not a poet but I’m not going for poetry but just a different format.

Go ahead and give some criticism though, I don’t mind as long as it’s not the fact that I’m not a poet and so the rhythm is probably off and such, but I just wanted everyone to know that! :)

The use of enjambment is apt, plus the concept is great! The last stanza is memorable. Just a suggestion here – standardizing the meter for each stanza would make it more rhythmic.