Suicide was my first thought when I read this. It is a very sad piece – filled with sorrow and hopelessness. Very depressing and yet very, very beautiful at the same time.

The breathe paragraph was the best – the connection between the dead body and the eulogy. So poetic! The anguish para was a bit of a battle – but it’s good that way: an outpouring of bitter emotion.

The use of the single words was very effective. Heartbreaking piece, really well written.
Abby x

Yeah, I really liked the anguish paragraph. this whole thing is written very well and I like it a lot actually.
Super sad, I wonder what had happened in his life to be so alone and to die the way he had.
really good though!!

I am assuming that the only way I can reply to comments is to comment on my own story?

Thank you both for your kind feedback. Now if I can just figure out the “unwritten” rules…